review worksheet

Paper Title  : The Dominican Flag

Date 4/5/11

Peer Review Worksheet

1. Introduction: How does the first paragraph introduce both the paper’s topic and the writer’s approach or general conclusion? Is the first sentence attention-getting and relevant to the topic?

I think i have a hook that gets the reader  attention. i explain in details my reason to my thesis.
i think i could of put more information explaining the way my my grandmother did the food.

2. What can you identify as a thesis statement? (Re-write it below) Suggest, if possible, a way to improve the introduction or thesis statement.

" i believe thats the way my grandmother cooked years ago is more healthy, freash and organic." i could explain more why i think this, whats different then the way my mom cooks it today that i chose my grandmother cooking best.

3. Structure: Can you identify the organization of the paper from the main idea of each paragraph? What are the main concepts explored in the paper? Does each paragraph make a relevant point that is distinct from what has already been covered? What are the main conclusions?

i have explain myself in each paragraph, make it clear on the point am trying to make, give enough feedback on my sources to make my understanding and point across.

4. Clarity/Style: Did you find distracting grammar, punctuation, spelling, or word usage problems? Identify any patterns or themes you detect. Is the tone of the essay formal? If you find awkward sentences, try to explain why they don’t make sense to you.

yes i did find some grammar, and spelling problems. i places commas in places that didnt need them, and places where i did need didnt place them. their were some spelling mistake that i cought along reading it after 3 times.

5. Resources: Does the author clearly identify his/her sources? Is proper in-text and reference format used?

i clearly identify my sources and where my quotes came from, and who said it and where did it come from. thought i need help in introducing the quote am going to use.

6. What is/are the paper’s greatest strength(s)? Explain.