I agree that buying soda with food stamp shouldnt be allow, because people who get food stamps should be able to buy food that are healthy for them and there family. many people take advantage of reciving food stamps because they buy alot of unhealthy food such as soda.  food that cause them health problems. people should use the money they get to buy healthy food, that isnt going to cause them any health issue in the future. though this is a strong arugement i think is a good a arugement becuase many parents are doing harm to their kids by feeding them junk food and giving me them soda, thenit dosnt do any good for them. is understandable that people who are reciveing food stamps should have the right to buy what ever food they like because is there money. but it should be taken into conceration that eating heathly is the best way for your health ....

SuperSize me and fast Food Nation

Fast food Nation

 Is a shame how they have so much advertisement everywhere we go advertising fast food places.They use these advertisment to catch young children attenction. do to these advertisments it has taken over our daily food, many of us rather eat fastfood then a home cooked meal. most companys dont care about the harm that their food is causing us human, they only care about the money they are making. companys sees that people are buying their food so of course they wont stop selling people food that they they keep buying weather is bad or good for them. all they care about is the money that is being brought to them.

Super size me was a movie on how McDonald  is bad for your health. Spurlock goes a month with only eating McDonald every day, 3 times a day, he's only allow to have one of every meal per day. This movie showed a huge change as days went by. He started off a healthy person with no health problems. As days went by more and more as he ate McDonals it cuased him alot of problems. he gain alot of weight, high cholesterol his blood pressure was high. After watching SuperSize me  it explains alot on why theres a lot of people who are overweight, and have lots of health issue.
         Its easy to stop a fast food place and eat rather then going home and cooking a meal. that explains why millions of people rather choose  fast food over  healthy food. many people people dont think about the harm they cause their body when they stop at a fast food place to eat. its hard to say no to  fast food when you have a fast food place to eat in every block in a half you walk.  i use to like eating Mcdonald all the time, until i got sick of eating it so i stop , without knowing the harm i was gaining from eathing this tyoe of food. now when am hungry i chose anything but Mcdonals to eat,  i only eat it like once every 5 months. witch i think it isnt that bad compare to people who stop everyday to eat at a fast food place. i am glad i got to watch this documentary i learned alot from it not only that McDonalds is bad for you but the huge harm it can cause a person if they become careless of their body and what they choose to feed it.

review worksheet

Paper Title  : The Dominican Flag

Date 4/5/11

Peer Review Worksheet

1. Introduction: How does the first paragraph introduce both the paper’s topic and the writer’s approach or general conclusion? Is the first sentence attention-getting and relevant to the topic?

I think i have a hook that gets the reader  attention. i explain in details my reason to my thesis.
i think i could of put more information explaining the way my my grandmother did the food.

2. What can you identify as a thesis statement? (Re-write it below) Suggest, if possible, a way to improve the introduction or thesis statement.

" i believe thats the way my grandmother cooked years ago is more healthy, freash and organic." i could explain more why i think this, whats different then the way my mom cooks it today that i chose my grandmother cooking best.

3. Structure: Can you identify the organization of the paper from the main idea of each paragraph? What are the main concepts explored in the paper? Does each paragraph make a relevant point that is distinct from what has already been covered? What are the main conclusions?

i have explain myself in each paragraph, make it clear on the point am trying to make, give enough feedback on my sources to make my understanding and point across.

4. Clarity/Style: Did you find distracting grammar, punctuation, spelling, or word usage problems? Identify any patterns or themes you detect. Is the tone of the essay formal? If you find awkward sentences, try to explain why they don’t make sense to you.

yes i did find some grammar, and spelling problems. i places commas in places that didnt need them, and places where i did need didnt place them. their were some spelling mistake that i cought along reading it after 3 times.

5. Resources: Does the author clearly identify his/her sources? Is proper in-text and reference format used?

i clearly identify my sources and where my quotes came from, and who said it and where did it come from. thought i need help in introducing the quote am going to use.

6. What is/are the paper’s greatest strength(s)? Explain.

list of soures.....

1. the food companys ingredients. what is in it
2. fast food nation: see the differece in the food, and what has changed over the years.
3. food ink the movie: talk about the meat and how different is being used today
4. online resources: google the difference types of seasoning that my mom uses today to cook
5. ask more questions, get into more details with my mom, maybe ask some of my aunts. other family members that also was around when my grandmother used to cook.

assignment #1

Elizabeth Guzman

          

            One traditional plate that my family enjoys today is rice and beans. It’s a plate that has been passed down from generation to generation in my family for many years. A lot people know this plate as the “The Dominican Flag” this is because is one of the traditional plates in the Dominican menu. Although rice and beans is really simple and easy to prepare we make it in different ways it can be separate or mixed to make a different meal.  When its being cooked mixed it is known as “moro” there are at least three types of “moro” I can mentioned now which are: red bean moro , black bean moro and pigeon beans moro. The same ingredients are being used as if you were doing the beans separated from the rice. Though my grandmother cooked it very different as to the way my mom cooks it today for us. The way that is made is sore of the same, but the ingredients came from different places. I believe that’s the way my grandmother cooked years ago is more healthy, fresh and organic.

            The ingredients that my grandmothers used are practically the same ingredients my mother uses today with one huge difference hers were fresh and hand picked. My grandmother had fields that she would grow her ingredients in, such as peppers, onions, garlic, tomatoes, spicy bitter orange, oregano and cilantro that would give the beans that special and unique flavor. The beans it self also came from the soil. These ingredients that my grandmothers used were healthily and fresh and all natural. She planted them in here field. However, the ingredients that my mother uses today come from the supermarket and are also shipped in from other countries. These ingredients have been probably procesed and have been packed for weeks. Another difference is the salt. My grandmother didn’t use grinded salt like the salt my mom uses today to cook.

           

            Though the ingredients may have been used different the seasoning is mostly the same. The onions, peppers, garlic is something that stays the same. In the other hand the beans and the sauce we use today are the beans and sauce that come in cans, and so the vinegar and salt. Being that the beans are in cans, they aren’t as hard so they be quicker and faster to cook. Something that’s additional that my moms uses is a seasoning that my grandmother never used because it wasn’t invented back then. Is a seasoning that is packed up called “Sa-son Accent”, is a powder sauce that she used to give the beans more flavor. My grandmother used a different form of tomato sauce. She planted her own tomato and she incorporated in the beans. Also the beans were hand picked. So she had to boil them in the mornings for about an hours and a half so they be soft by the time she would have the dinner ready. One thing that my grandmother used and my mother uses today to cook the beans is the oil. They both cook with corn oil, though sometimes my mother uses olive oil to cook. They both have the same calories of fat, cholesterol, sodium and carbohydrate.

Finally even though the meal was cooked with the same ingredients just that back then the ingredients were fresh and better, the meal remains the same as today, and is being still traditional in my family. Another thing that is different is the time that dinner is being served and is being eaten. Here the meal is put on the table around 5 or 6pm. In the Dominican Republic the meal is severed at 12pm noon and this was and still is a very important part of the culture because everyone sits down around the table to eat together. I believe that the healthiest way was how my grandmother cooked due to the fact that everything was organic and it was planted in her field and all she had to do was go hand pick it herself, unlike my mom today who goes to the supermarket and gets her ingredients to cook dinner. It was a healthier meal back then than it is today even if it is the same and it is prepared the same way, with the difference that the ingredients were hand picked and were all natural and afresh.

food ink

This movie was really cool. in the ways that we get our food today, and what is being done to these animals.  i think is really un fair how these companys only care for them self and the money that they getting, and not for the health of the humans who is eating there products. i realize that this is really bad for us because is the food that eat, though is fast ans easy food that come to our mind when we are hungry and though we are not thinking about the harm that it may cause us we eat it anyways. but after seeing this movie it really grossed me out, mostly how these farmers dont really care much about how it can cause us harm, all they seem to care about is their money worth. while back when my mother started bringing home organic food i would hate because  i always felt that organic food didnt have much flavor, but now i understand why my mother went organic on everything she buys. is way healthier, and freasher and way better..